Tuesday, July 2, 2013

Presentation: Peer Response

For my presentation, I gave a brief analysis of where I was at in the research for Assignment Six, my researched argument. Furthermore, I discussed the method of my research and the style with which I would present my final researched argument.

In addition to the presentation, I requested suggestions from my peers as to what I should change about my topic or add to it as well as improve on my argument. James suggested looking into the biological aspects of how and why men treat women in certain ways. This was helpful feedback and may suggest a more well rounded argument. In addition, Mr. Robles asked for clarification on how I would present my final argument.

I was thankful for the opportunity to present my research and receive helpful incite from my peers. In the process of preparing my presentation, I could see holes in my argument, which was helpful. Also, I was pleased with what improvement I saw in today's presentation in comparison with my previous presentation. For one, I was not as loud and aggressive as last time.

For those that read this reflection, I would appreciate suggestions as to how to present a controversial topic, while uniting my audience.